I think a lot of people don't like hard critiques, but I hate easy ones. I want to know what I'm doing wrong so I can fix it. I was on an ok track, and I think everyone liked my photo's themselves. After the critique though there are a lot of things I want to change to make it better. Everyone was very insistent I needed to put more of the story in the presentation, they wanted a way to connect to the cats. Someone suggested that I do more screenshots of the book in progress so people could see what the actual book looks like. Another point was that I should have character descriptions with my introduction page of the family. Something else I will change is putting pictures from my influences and moving the influences slide up farther in the presentation. My favorite suggestion by far is the changing of the subtitle from: "A year in the lives of the cats of 32 Parkwood Ave" to simply "The lives of the cats of 32 Parkwood Ave". I LOVE this name and I can't believe I didn't think of it myself.
In all I really really enjoyed this critique!
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