Critique Reflection 2/26/15

Meeting with Julie and Zane to talk about my project today was really helpful. The most important thing I need to change is the format of the book. The format I have has the book arranged by month with a picture and a little bit of text at the beginning of each month. Julie suggested it would give it a lot more visual cohesion for each chapter to start with only the text, not the picture, because the transition between months was getting lost. The other main change I am going to make is with my artist statement, I need to talk about the fact that this project is a documentary of sorts, so far that doesn't appear anywhere in my artist statement and it is a main part of my project, Whoops! I also need to condense down my WHY part of my artists statement to an essential sentence on why this matters, why I am doing it. I think I am pretty well prepared for the midpoint presentation next week, I'm actually really looking forward to the presentation, I want to get a lot of different feedback from as many people as possible.